The Friday Picture Show -Week 4
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The Great Prince
They looked like wraiths hanging on the wall with no suspension. I’d seen their kind before and I knew what they did to the unsuspecting. looking behind them and saw the fallen, one by one lying on the floor. They would soon breach the wall that held them back and then those behind it were doomed. I took up my sword preparing to slay the wicked. Watching as the wall was breached and they entered in, I took a breath and charged. We had defeated Satan one more and I, Archangel Michael could rest until needed once more.
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100 words #FlashFriday Who-hoo Go #Fictioners
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In the middle of nowhere a horse could mean the difference between life and death but now my horse was hobbled and I needed to get help from miles away. Father was bleeding to death a slip of his axe. Mother stemmed the bleeding as best she could but it was a losing battle Father needed a doctor fast. The horse was tired and panting I knew I needed to abandon it soon until I could return. I heard the sounds of hoofs coming my way Thank goodness my Uncle Robert the doctor had returned Father was saved.
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Neat double feature! Is there a reason you put multiple items in one post, though? Wouldn't it be easier to search out later if each story had its own entry?
ReplyDeleteYou could probably turn your flash into a short story that would work for Duke's emag Frontier Tales. I can't ever seem to write without it turning weird. Thanks for joining us today!
ReplyDeleteI love the brevity of each piece..the story full up inside them..great writes..Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you John. I put them together because thye are both friday fiction and short.They are lsited what each is.
ReplyDeleteThank you Madison
Thanks Jae Rose I appreciate you always reading my blog
It was interesting that the Archangel started so many sentences with I...wouldn't have realized how egoistical angels could be without this story. Robin
ReplyDeletethanks for pointing that out Robin it's so to something I am working on in my writing. the tendency to repeat words.I have taken a few I's out now thanks.
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