Three Word Wednesday -Third Eye Part 3
This is from a WIP, I am working on and is the last installment for now.
Prompts:
Brutal;
adjective: Savagely violent; punishingly hard or uncomfortable; direct and
lacking any attempt to disguise unpleasantness.
Grope; verb:
[No object] feel about or search blindly or uncertainly with the hands; [with
object] (informal) feel or fondle (someone) for sexual pleasure, esp. against
their will; noun: An act of fondling someone for sexual pleasure.
Transfer;
verb: Move from one place to another; move to another group, occupation, or
service; change to another place, route, or means of transportation during a
journey; make over the possession of (property, a right, or a responsibility)
to someone else; noun: An act of moving something or someone to another place.
If you missed Part 1 see http://sheilaghlee.blogspot.ca/2013/02/three-word-wednesday-wake.html
If you missed Part 2 see http://sheilaghlee.blogspot.ca/2013/02/three-word-wednesday-third-eye-part-2.html
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Third Eye-Part 3
The day started off badly, and not just because the
detective was downstairs, though that certainly added to it. My legs would not
cooperate today. They felt rubber-like and I struggled to even stand. Then to
really make my day worse I could feel a haint trying to materialize itself to
me. I turned my head and could see the outline of Agatha.
“Not now,” I said under my breath.
“Yes now. The detective awaits, miss. I’ll get you
dressed and help you put on your leg braces,” Annie assured me as she transferred
me to a chair.
I didn’t want the detective to see me looking frail
again. But why, did I worry so much about him? Grandmother’s wrath would be worse;
she must know where I went yesterday, thanks to the detective. Why
couldn’t she have remained in ignorance? Now Agatha was here and I’d be locked up
if Grandmother knew I could see her. I suddenly felt guilty here I was focused on me, and Mr.
Cooke had been murdered.
Why the detective sought me out to speak about his
death I wasn’t sure. I had no knowledge of the man, other than what his wife
Agatha had told me and I certainly wouldn’t discuss that.
“Here’s your medicine,” Annie commented offering me
a glass.
“I told you I’m not taking that anymore. It makes my
mouth dry, making me thirsty all the time and I don’t want to feel like I’m not
quite there. Besides
I need all my wits about me.”
“Your Grandmother bade me to make you, take it,”
Annie insisted.
“What she doesn’t know, won’t hurt her or me,” I
countered.
“Are you sure you can withstand the pain?” Annie
asked looking worried.
“Fine, let me have a few sips.”
I drank a little and then set down the glass. It
tasted so bitter. Even the cinnamon and sugar, added to the laudanum, couldn’t
take away the after taste. I leaned on my cane and Annie until we reached the
drawing room doors. They were closed as I suspected. I could let go of Annie’s
arm and glide across the room, appearing normal. It was only a few steps to the
settee.
I opened the doors and saw him, Thomas Cooke
standing talking to my grandmother. She couldn’t hear, or see him, of course,
but I did, and it unnerved me. I had to compose my face, so they didn’t see how
scared he made me. The detective spoke to Grandmother. Hearing my approach he
turned, and a look of male appreciation. He then tried to hide it.
“He fancies you,” Thomas Cooke commented looking
straight at me.
I tried not to appear I heard him. Maybe if I
ignored him he’d go away.
“Miss Kendall, did your maid tell you why I ‘m here?
Mr. Cooke has been murdered.”
“Of course, she did you idiot. Now find out who
killed me, instead of ogling the woman,” Thomas Cooke shouted in the detective’s
ear.
Oddly enough, Detective Bristol startled as if he
heard Mr. Cooke. Detective Bristol’s features than became composed and showed
no sign he’d seen a shade. Obviously
I was being fanciful, wishing someone else would hear Thomas Cooke, instead of
me.
“Yes, Detective Bristol,” I answered seating myself
on the settee.
“You had an encounter with the deceased yesterday?”
“You know I did. You rescued me.”
“You can see me. Agatha said you could tell him. Tell
him I was poisoned!” Thomas Cooke insisted brutally grabbing my arm.
It hurt and I feared bruising, but I ignored him. Mr.
Cooke then turned to Agatha who told him, “Wait she’ll hear you out later. You
can’t just grope and pull at her. She can’t help you if she’s locked up in an
asylum.”
“Fine, but I’ll be back and you better help me, or
you’ll be sorry!” Mr. Cooke shouted at me.
Then the two of them disappeared, but I knew they’d
be back later.
“Mary Katherine you told me you were going to
Kingsmills, not this man’s home.” Grandmother admonished, then thinking better
of bringing this up in front of the detective, she said, “We will discuss this later.”
“You didn’t tell your grandmother where you were
going?”
“I remembered only that morning what his wife had
told me on the boat. I felt he needed to know where she left their money,” I
lied.
“Thomas Cooke died about three hours after that.”
“That has nothing to do with my granddaughter. Why
are you here?” Grandmother interrupted.
“Mr. Cooke had scratches on his arms. Scratches that
you gave him,” Detective Bristol continued ignoring grandmother.
“He grabbed me and held me fast. If I scratched him
it was only to get free. How would scratches kill him?”
“Our medical examiner has determined with the help
of his chemist that Thomas Cooke was poisoned.”
“As I said that has nothing to do with Mary
Katherine, so you should be on your way young man.”
“The chemist said poison and they say poison is a
woman’s tool.”
“How dare you?” I asked outraged.
“Do you honestly think my granddaughter poisoned him
with her fingernails? She didn’t even know the man,”
“My daughter would never do such a thing. How dare
you?” my mother spoke up.
“I am a police detective it’s my job to discern the
guilty.”
“You aren’t very observant I was wearing gloves
yesterday,” I countered, realizing I couldn't have scratched him.
Detective
Bristol looked surprised, then happy, as he stated, “So you were Miss Kendall.
Thank you for reminding me.”
“I didn’t
know Mr. Cooke. Why would you think I killed him?”
“So you never
met him before yesterday?”
“Not to my
knowledge,” I answered truthfully.
“Did you
know he was on the Victoria, and he too survived?”
“No, I
didn’t.”
“My
granddaughter has been through enough. She’s been recovering from my injuries
the last year. If you know about the Victoria, then you understand we have only
the good lord to thank for my granddaughter’s survival, when so many perished.
She finds the conversation about it painful, and so do I. So I think there will
be no more questioning Detective Bristol. It must be obvious to you the man
quarreled with someone else and they poisoned him. Now I’ll be happy to serve
you another cup of tea, and then you can be on your way,” Grandmother announced.
“Thank you,
but no thank you, madam. As you’ve said I have a crime to solve. I’ll be on my
way. Could you see me to the door, Miss Kendall?” Detective Bristol begged.
“Certainly
Detective Bristol.”
“Annie, go
with your mistress,” Grandmother commanded.
The
medicine had started to work and my legs felt almost normal, well as normal as
my legs were now.So I was able to walk to the door, without showing my
frailty.When we reached the front door, I was surprised to hear him ask, “Miss
Kendall, would you go with me to the Grand Opera House? I have balcony seats.”
“You acted
like I was a suspect, and you want me to attend the opera with you?”
“I had to
eliminate you and I have done so. Please I’d be delighted to have you go with
me.”
I was
thrilled he noticed me as a woman, not an invalid. For the first time in over a
year, a man had noticed me. Granted his profession as a police detective made
him far beneath my social sphere, but something about him attracted me and made
me feel alive.
I hesitated then asked, “I would have to bring my maid Annie. Wouldn’t that be prohibitive?”
I hesitated then asked, “I would have to bring my maid Annie. Wouldn’t that be prohibitive?”
“Not at all.
I can get the box for the evening.”
“Thank you,
I’d be delighted,” I answered, smiling.
“Tomorrow
evening then, I’ll arrive to pick you up at seven p.m.,” Detective Bristol stated
going out the front door and to his carriage.
“You shouldn't have encouraged him.Your grandmother won’t be happy,” Annie
cautioned, shutting the door.
“When is she
ever?” I commented.
“He is a
handsome one but you better be careful, he's below you socially. Now brace yourself, you
have to go face the music with your grandmother, miss.”
“I know,” I
admitted as I opened the doors into the drawing room once again; worried that
not only did I have to face Grandmother, but later the two ghosts of the
Cooke’s.
© Sheilagh Lee March 6, 2013
So you are going to leave us in the lurch are you? She may fancy the detective but the family will be bound to disapprove. Meanwhile Cooke is hanging in limbo and she is the only one that can see him. Are you sure you are taking a break?
ReplyDeletethank you Old egg maybe I'll revisit it later.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your story! Will have to be sure to check back in case you add another chapter!
ReplyDeleteI like this story. You have blended genres well, and the characters are interesting. (Mr. Cooke is so hateful!)
ReplyDeletethank you Robyn
ReplyDeletethank you Heidi and yes Mr. Cooke is hateful.Maybe we will find out that played a part in his murder.
Nice story-line Sheilagh! Being poisoned is a nasty death as it progressed slowly and one suffers.
ReplyDeleteHank
Oh Sheilagh! Don't leave it too long before continuing with this gripper.
ReplyDeleteIt's bad enough facing the living at times! let alone the deceased..another juicy series begun.. x
ReplyDeletethank you Kaykuala (Hank)
ReplyDeleteThank you Altonian.
Thank you Jaerose.
Sheilagh, this is a ripping good story! You have chosen your characters well... a strong female protagonist with the ability to see and hear the dead. Her relief at being seen as a woman and not a "cripple" was palpable. Also, the time is evident not only in characters' speech, but in things like laudanum. Unfortunately, they still jump to conclusions like poison being a "woman's weapon." Some things never change!
ReplyDeleteThx for stopping by to say hello and leave a comment. If you can stand another, here it is! Peace and love, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/03/09/stone-cold-trifecta/
thank you Amy.
ReplyDeleteNice series...interesting story and plot
ReplyDeletethank you Atob
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